Three Word Wednesday
The rules, if you wanna call 'em that, are here.
Today's Words: Breath, Scattered, Tomorrow
Time
She breathed out a long, slow breath. Scattered, loving memories of her family and friends invaded the totality of her consciousness. Tomorrow didn’t matter any more. She flickered....and then she was gone.
17 comments:
A very good and succinct use of the words.
Reminds me a bit of what I wrote. Very nice.
http://collectingmythoughts.blogspot.com/2008/01/3ww-three-word-wednesday-today-january.html
a perfectly coined thought... very nice carlos....
Dark, but nicely done.
I echo what TC said. It's the flickered that catches me.
Liked it. funny what the words connote.
She breathed out and then was invaded. I had expected she would release. I will think on this.
My breath stunk so bad, all the pigeons in the park scattered when I yelled at them. To hell with them. Rats with wings. NBD, I'll brush my teeth tomorrow.
Final. Dark. Deep. Concise. Very nice!
I watched my grandmother die and it was just like that! You captured it very well.
yeppers..life in, life out..beautifully spoken
She let out a long, slow breath after the cum was scattered all over the room and was too tired to clean it up now. She said she'd do it tomorrow.
Reminds me of the time my dad passed away...
Thanks, Carlos..
if tomorrow comes
Off with her head!
Somehow I didn't think of sad things with these words, as did so many others.
Hard to handle, but nice.
Thank you all for your kind comments.
I wrote this short piece because the words of the day reminded me of my experience holding my mother as she left this troubled earth of ours.
This was so poignant...a very touching use of the prompt.
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