Three Word Wednesday
Today's Words: Burning, Quietly, Taxi
Morning
Morning
Continuation of "Dreams"
She slipped into the back seat of the taxi, quietly bearing the burning toll the sun had exacted on her fair skin the previous day. Michelle’s eyes welled up as the cab pulled away from the curb.
Janice slept, murmuring quietly as she dreamed about something. A distant garbage truck whined. Wind chimes on the back porch stirred under a light sea breeze as birds slowly awakened to the twilight of another morning.
Janice slept, murmuring quietly as she dreamed about something. A distant garbage truck whined. Wind chimes on the back porch stirred under a light sea breeze as birds slowly awakened to the twilight of another morning.
16 comments:
Economic yet very evocative. This wazs really good.
P.S. Can you tell me how to include a link in a commentary the way you did it on the 3WW site? Thanks.
Very descriptive and can solidly stand alone even without "Dreams". :)
A lot said in a few words.
Rose
xo
well done... quick clean and concise...
Short and succinct!
I really enjoy your style of writing, I went back to Dreams, and will go back and read others...
Works very well on its own... Good job. (And as part of your story, it's even better).
Such sadness in so few words. I wonder how Janice will react when she finds Michelle is gone.
Two short paragraphs, but I most definitely am hooked and would like to know more about Michelle and Janice...:~)
very very nice word poetry. I too would like to know more about the characters
Goodbye, Michelle. Things have a way of working out. Trust Carlos.
That was way to short!
Ooo, so she's going to Tennessee? The story is unfolding nicely, Carlos.
Wow! Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I do appreciate them very much! You're all way too kind.
Carlos, you are way too modest.
You're going to continue this, right?
:)
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